Monday 14 May 2012


by the way, you know Tane

Down at the beach on a hot sunny day

He` s a good bloke, he likes a good coke

His grandpa and grandma are proned to having strokes


                                    2 days ago at his mate Bruce Baylis`s

He dropped a nuclear bomb on top of the states

All that was left was a man on the dunny

And old Bruce thought that it was quite funny
by Jackson
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8 comments:

  1. Millie14 May 2012 at 21:01

    Wow thats really good Jackson!
    from Millie

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  2. Otarama14 May 2012 at 21:09

    Wow did you make that Jackson its awesome!
    Emma J

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    1. Otarama14 May 2012 at 21:33

      Wow cool did you make that up yourself?
      lizzy

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  3. Otarama14 May 2012 at 21:34

    Lol :)
    That is funny Jackson do you make it up?
    Emma L

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  4. Otarama14 May 2012 at 22:12

    Wow that's cool

    Caitlin

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  5. Otarama14 May 2012 at 23:34

    Thats a good poem Jackson

    Lucy

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  6. Otarama14 May 2012 at 23:42

    Wowa Jackson You are a really good poem writer u should be a poet Good JOB!!!!!! :) Eva G

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  7. Otarama17 May 2012 at 15:04

    guys i have to say it wasn't all me tane helped too

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